Excerpt: The Dragon Shield

Today, A Few Words is pleased to present an excerpt from the book The Dragon Shield by author Dianne Lynn Gardner.  Read on to find out more about this wonderful YA novel. 

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“And you say that when you got to the mountain, he was tied. But the scouts saw him run free. Why is that?” He turned to his son, flames in his eyes. “Why, Ian? Why did you let him go if you knew he had power over the dragon?”

What am I going to say? The kid cried and I felt sorry for him, because that’s what happened. “Dad…”

The air was unbearably stiff.

“Man,” Ian beat his fist on the table and stood. “Stop it, Dad. This isn’t right.”

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Ruminations: Dark Expectations

blog tour banner2I recently received an advance review copy of Dark Expectations, the second book in the Soul Sisters series by Janiera Eldridge.  As part of the Dark Expectations blog tour, I’d like to offer up a few thoughts about the story for those who enjoy a good paranormal romance read.  I’m trying to avoid spoilers so I may be vague but feel free to chat about it in the comments.

My first thoughts on reading Dark Expectations were colored by the fact that I don’t have much experience in reading paranormal romance.  To be quite honest, I wanted to read this story mostly for the cover.  The women on it actually look like women that I’ve known and it’s refreshing to see a novel full of diverse characters who play a number of complex roles in their universe.  This is one of the aspects of Dark Expectations that really stood out for me–I see too few books (particularly those set in modern cities) that actually reflect the world I live in in terms of who is represented in it.

The focus of this series is the relationships between different creatures in the supernatural world.  I haven’t read the first novel in the series–while I wouldn’t say that I had trouble catching up, I feel as if I ought to go back and do so.  There were a lot of nuances in the plot that I think I missed, yet it was very easy to understand what had happened in the previous book.  In fact, one of the interesting aspects of this story was that it places a character (Ani) in a situation of leadership for which she doesn’t feel ready.  I find power shifts fascinating to read about and I think that not only does Dark Expectations start the story out with one, but it lays the foundation to continue exploring what is ultimately somewhat interrupted in future endeavors by Eldridge.

This book would appeal to readers of the Twilight series though I think that its heroines, particularly Dana (my favorite character), are much stronger than Bella in that story.  In fact, that’s one of the many ways in which this story turns my own expectations on their head.  Women have power in this universe–they hold many of the cards–and from my limited exposure to paranormal romance, I feel that this is much too rare in the genre.  Watching the ways in which Dana and Ani manipulate the situations in which they are placed is a lot of fun.  These are not women that will lie down and let men walk all over them.  One of the things that impresses me most about Ani is the trait recognized by the author as both her strength and her weakness–the ability to walk away.  I look forward to seeing how this unfolds in the next book because of the ending of Expectations.  (And I really can say no more than that because I don’t want to ruin it.)

All in all, this is a very interesting take on vampires and werewolves.  And I have a feeling many more secrets lie ahead in the Soul Sisters universe!

Obligatory Disclaimer:

I received this book as part of a tour from the author in return for an honest review.  The copy that I received was an ARC and I do not comment on grammar, typos, or quote directly from the work for this reason.  (If you want to see the final work, there’s always “Look Inside” on Amazon.)

Dark Expectations 7The Details:

Title: Dark Expectations (Book 2 in the Soul Sisters Trilogy)

Author: Janiera Eldridge

Release Day: October 31, 2012

SynopsisWith Ani taking her place as queen, there are some enemies lurking she could never imagine! There’s a secret compound in California that wants to know the secrets to making a vampire or werewolf. When they kidnap Ani during a trip back to California they might actually get what they want. Her sister Dana, her lover Diego and other vampires do everything they can to get her back. If they don’t succeed, they face being controlled completely by the human race forever! Dark Expectations is the exciting sequel to Soul Sisters that’s full of adventure, danger and what it means to be queen!

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9016_1048197421837_1732740364_91005_7263899_nAuthor BioJaniera enjoys feeding her book addiction when she not writing. She is also a book blogger at Beauty and Books where she mixes being a book nerd with keeping things chic. When not reading or writing she is freelance writing in the entertainment industry.When trying to relax she likes a huge yard sale on a Saturday morning, rainy days to read by and nacho cheese is her kryptonite. Soul Sisters is her debut novel.

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Reading Aloud: A Few Tips for Authors

During my book tour last September, quite a few people asked me after my readings if I had any tips on how to read aloud.  There really isn’t a right way or a wrong way to do this but I decided to share some things that worked for me over at the blog of Dianne Gardner.

Visit Ian’s Realm and More for my take on reading aloud to an audience.

Spotlight: The Exile’s Violin by R.S. Hunter [steampunk]

It’s no real secret to those who know me that I’ve been easing my way into steampunk over the past few months as I work on a novel that’s something of a foray into the genre.

One book I recently enjoyed was The Exile’s Violin by R.S. Hunter.  As a gamer as well as fantasy author, I appreciate good worldbuilding.  I love stories where the author has put an intense amount of thought into how things work and what the cultures are like within their universe, as well as considered things like character and plot.  Exile is one of those novels where I read it and instantly thought “I really want to play in a game set on Tethys.”  While I wouldn’t want to live on the planet for sure, I think it’d be fun to escape there from time to time.

So a little about the book itself:

Why hire mercenaries to kill an innocent family just to obtain one little key? That question haunts Jacquie Renairre for six years as she hunts down the people responsible for murdering her parents.

Not even accepting an assignment to investigate a conspiracy that aims to start a war can keep her from searching for the key. Armed with her father’s guns and socialite Clay Baneport, she continues her quest for answers abroad.

With the world edging closer to disaster, Jacquie is running out of time to figure out how the war, the key, and ancient legend are intertwined. The fate of the world hinges on her ability to unravel both mysteries before it’s too late.

You can find it on Amazon in e-book format right now.

I myself am also going to pick it up in paperback when it’s out–that cover (not to mention the contents) is one I definitely want on my shelf.  (Though I’m undoubtedly prejudiced as the art is done by the ever-awesome Enggar Adirasa.  Does that name sound familiar?  :)  )

The Next Big Thing: The Unwilling

A photograph by Depression-era photographer Dorothea Lange. Courtesy of the Library of Congress.

I’ve been tagged for “The Next Big Thing,” a series of posts about the projects that authors are working on.  A big thanks to the ever-amazing Peter Giglio, Scott Bradley, and R.S. Hunter for the tags.

This was actually a really hard meme for me to complete.  I’m working on a number of projects right now.  Closest to my heart at the moment is Efimera but to write about that project truly merits a different kind of post than this.  The Jealousy Glass, next novel in the Artifacts of Empire series, comes out this Saturday so I decided that writing about that wouldn’t be as interesting, perhaps, as talking about my far future project.  So that’s where this comes from.

1) What is the working title of your next book?

The book that I’m currently working on has the working title The Unwilling.  There’s a specific reference that I pulled the title from (bonus points to anyone who can figure it out!).

2) Where did the idea come from for the book?

As a fantasy reader, I’ve noticed that a lot of the tropes with which we’re so familiar come from Tolkien.  I’m intrigued by the stereotypes that seem to have drifted into the common understanding of what cultures and creatures are and wanted to play with that a little myself.  My Artifacts of Empire series is fairly minimal from a fantastic point of view.  While there are magic and certain magical creatures exist, much of that world’s magic was burnt out and you’re never going to see an elf or dwarf walking around Cercia.

3) What genre does your book fall under?

I suspect it will be hard to classify but I’d say dark historical urban crime fantasy with a strong hint of horror.

Let’s just call it… fiction.

4) What actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?

This is a tough one and admittedly, I’m bad with naming my characters so I expect that the ones I list here will probably have their names changed by the time The Unwilling is ready to go.  I also don’t always cast people in my head–this story is definitely one of those where I haven’t done (until now).

Liach, a male elven “soldier,” would most definitely be portrayed by Sasha Roiz.  Roiz has done a lot of things but I’ll always remember him best as Sam Adama from Caprica, one of my favorite TV shows.  (And yes, I’m also a huge BSG fan.)  Roiz has a certain clarity and sharpness in his facial expression that would suit this character well.  He could stand to work on the pointy ears but we’ll forgive him that.

Photo by Dorothea Lange. Courtesy of the Library of Congress.

Daisy, who is the central figure as of this writing, would likely best be portrayed physically by Romola Garai a little older than she appeared in I Capture the Castle.  (Though her emotional and spiritual journey would better be summed up by Jennifer Lawrence in Winter’s Bone.)  Another candidate for casting would be the elven leader Iryamil—she’s Kate Winslet from her Mildred Pierce days, all the way.

5) What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

Oh, the dreaded logline!  Perhaps… “How can you live forever if there’s nothing left to live for?”

6) Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?

I haven’t yet decided which way I’ll go with the book though I’m inclined not to self-publish at this stage of the game.  My other novels have been published by a small press and I found that to be a positive experience.  I’ll cheerfully admit, however, that I already have a cover artist/illustrator in mind if he’ll take the job (and of course, if I end up having a say in the matter).

At this point, I’m not represented by an agent but I’m very interested in speaking to one about this or my collaborative project.

7) How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?

It is still in progress.  I anticipate I’ll have a first draft finished by the end of next year or the beginning of 2014.  I have other projects going that also require my attention and this novel is complex in terms of scope and plotline.

8) What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

This is The Lord of the Rings meets The Godfather meets The Hellbound Heart.  Which means, of course, that it will feel and act like none of these.

9) Who or what inspired you to write this book?

My research on the economic depressions experienced worldwide in the 1930s, my fascination with bizarre facets of history and my curiosity about genre reliance on the works of J.R.R. Tolkien.

I also give some credit for my attempting to try something like this on my workshopping adventures with R.S. Hunter.  His worldbuilding and outlining abilities are a thing of beauty–I’m incredibly jealous of the way that he develops all of his worlds.  (You can see a great example of this in his Tethys steampunk novels, the first being The Exile’s Violin.)

10) What else about the book might pique the reader’s interest?

Two words: bad elves.

Now, the thing about this meme is that you’re supposed to tag other authors.  So here are a few I read/follow that I’d love to see do it (and I hope that none of you mind the tag):  Matthew Arnold Stern, Melissa Goodman, Michael Turner, M.S. Fowle, and Jack Lewis Baillot.

HOW NOT TO OPEN A SHORT STORY

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I generally don’t like this kind of negative approach: lists of what not to do. I prefer to encourage you to do things, not discourage you from doing things, but back to the subject of short stories, I can’t help but point out some very common pitfalls that I’ve seen over and over again for years—decades, actually. So here goes, in no particular order, half a dozen things you should never do in the first page of a short story:

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This is a really excellent post on how to begin short stories. I think it's good advice to follow for just about any kind of writing.

We live in a beautiful world (image spotlight)

I’ve been crazy-busy preparing for the December 1 release of my next novel, The Jealousy Glass, but every once in a while, you have to stop and stare at something beautiful.

Dutch artist  Berndnaut Smilde has found a way to create clouds indoors for his photographs and the results are stunning.  You can see them at his website: http://www.berndnaut.nl/works.htm

I’d share an image with you here but so much of his work is really amazing that it’s best to direct you all there.

 

Cover Reveal: Into the Spiral

What would you say if shadows began to speak to you?  That’s the question YA author (and a personal friend of mine), Erin Danzer, explores in the first book of her Spiral Defenders trilogy.  I’m pleased to share her new cover with you along with a few hints about what you can expect when it appears online on Black Friday (and in print later this Christmas season).

About Into the Spiral

Fifteen-year-old Veronica “Ronnie” Lambert wants to get out from under her older brother’s shadow. When Ronnie gets a tattoo and then is struck by lightning, she suddenly finds herself able to see and hear things in shadows that don’t appear to others. Then Ronnie meets Gavin Clearwater, the hot new guy in all of her classes and finds out he can see and hear the same things she can.

Gavin tells her about the Spiral Defenders, a group of warriors that travels through space and time to defend the planets of the Spiral. After meeting the Commander of the Spiral Defenders and realizing his intentions might not be pure, Ronnie struggles between following her destiny to become a Spiral Defender and trying to regain the life she had before being struck by lightning.

 

About the Author

Erin Danzer wrote her first book at 10-years-old for a Young Authors competition, where she was awarded an Honorable Mention and discovered a passion for the written word. She’s written several novels and short stories since that spark ignited. She writes a monthly short story serial, The Cassandra Serafin Chronicles, posting alternately on her blog and in Literary Lunes bi-monthly online magazine. Into the Spiral is Erin’s debut novel. Erin resides in Wisconsin with her husband, two children, and their cat.

Website: http://www.erindanzer.com

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Traitor Angel {review}

In Traitor Angel, the second book of the Angelkiller Triad,  the war between The Army of Light and The Enemy continues behind the scenes. Unknown to the general population, the battle for control of humanity is heating up.

Jonah Mason, called Angelkiller, faces more than one decision. His Army resistance cell is wounded physically and emotionally, on the brink of falling apart. The mysterious allies calling themselves Knights are pressuring him to abandon his people. Meanwhile, the world outside draws closer to Armageddon.

As Mason and his friends pursue their campaign against Dorian Azrael’s global megacorporation, Andlat Enterprises, the stakes get higher with each desperate foray into the enemy’s computers. They are fated to lose one of their number and gain an unlikely ally, but any advantage they gain could be fleeting at best.

If they fail, it could mean the end of The Army and all resistance to the forces of Darkness.


Traitor Angel is the second installment in H. David Blalock’s Angelkiller Triad. I don’t normally read books concerning a “war in heaven”–to be honest, books about angels typically strike me as being a variation on the same theme. (If you’ve seen The Prophecy, you’ve read them all.) However, the concepts behind this trilogy have intrigued me for a long time and as a result, when the tour opened up, I decided it was well past time to give the book a chance.

There is a lot about Traitor Angel that distinguishes it from other books in this genre which I found a pleasant surprise.  It begins with a war, yes, but it is a war waged largely in cyberspace.  The terminology used is different as well–while there are angels and demons, they are referred to as the “Army” and the “Enemy.”  The war is important but it’s not waged with a literal fiery sword–instead, it relies more on the kind of technology you might see in a MMORPG.

I felt that the story itself had a bit of a DaVinci Code feel to it though I don’t know whether this was intentional on the author’s part.  It was the events that pulled me to the book rather than characterization.  I love a character-driven novel and would have liked to have seen more focus on characters but having not read the first book, I didn’t have the same attachment to them that I might otherwise have had.  The events, setting, and plot were strong enough to keep me really interested in the story so in the end, this isn’t a criticism of the book so much as it’s a suggestion that reading both novels would be likely to add more layers to an understanding of what is a fairly complicated piece.

Traitor Angel brings to mind books like Jacqueline Carey’s Banewreaker in terms of its willingness to push the tradition of good versus evil into new places (though its world is very, very different).  All in all, I think that this book would  appeal to fans of the genre who look for books that fall outside the norm and who like innovation in setting and story.  This book (and its predecessor) are available on Amazon.


Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book for review from First Rule Publicity from the author as part of a virtual book tour. I was not compensated nor was I required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”